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IELTS-related stuff. Welcome aboard!
managed by @laziz_atabaev (L:9.0 R:9.0 W:9.0 S:8.0)
IELTS Speaking band 7.0 candidate.
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If you can't extend your speaking part 2 up to 2 minutes, there is a recommended strategy how to fix this:
You should divide your speech into 4 parts:
Part 1️⃣: Introduction
"I’d like to talk about a journey that I’ll never forget. It was a trip I took to Samarkand, one of the most historical cities in Uzbekistan."
Part 2️⃣:Background / Context
"I made this trip about two years ago with two of my closest friends. We decided to travel by train because it’s comfortable, affordable, and allows you to see the beautiful countryside along the way. None of us had visited Samarkand before, so we were incredibly excited."
Part 3️⃣:Details / Description
"The journey itself took around three hours, but it felt much shorter because we were chatting, playing games, and enjoying the scenery. When we finally arrived, we went straight to Registan Square, which is breathtaking. The architecture was stunning, with huge madrasahs decorated in blue tiles. I remember standing there in awe, trying to imagine what life must have been like centuries ago. Apart from sightseeing, we also tried local dishes like plov and samsa, which made the trip even more enjoyable."
Part4️⃣:Conclusion / Personal Reflection
"Overall, this journey was truly unforgettable, not just because I discovered a new city, but also because I shared the experience with close friends. It strengthened our bond, gave us lifelong memories, and made me realize how rich and fascinating my country’s culture really is."
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How to write main bodies in Writing task 2?
You should use a following structure to get high score in CC(Coherence&Cohesion):
Main Body Paragraph
Topic sentence:
One major reason why governments should invest in public transportation is that it helps reduce traffic congestion in cities.
Explanation 1:
When fewer people rely on private cars, there are fewer vehicles on the road, which directly decreases traffic jams.
Explanation 2:
Efficient bus and metro systems can carry thousands of passengers at the same time, making them far more effective than individual cars.
Example:
For instance, after Seoul expanded its subway system in the early 2000s, the average commuting time dropped by nearly 20%.
Result:
Therefore, by prioritizing investment in public transport, governments can improve urban mobility, save citizens’ time, and create more efficient cities.
@ielts_atabaev
In IELTS, there are several ways to paraphrase, here are the main ones:
1️⃣Synonyms/Word substitution
Replace words with different meaning.
Many people believe technology is useful.
A large number of individuals think technology is beneficial.
2️⃣Change Word Form
Use a different part of speech.
Technology improves communication. Communication has been improved by technology.
3️⃣Sentence Structure Change
Change active passive, or reorder phrases.
Governments should invest in education. Investment in education should be made by governments.
4️⃣Use Definitions or Explanations
Explain the word instead of using a synonym.
Obesity is a growing problem.
Being overweight has become an increasing issue.
To get a high score in Task 2, you need relevant ideas and full explanations — this is clearly stated in the band descriptors.
But did you know that the way you introduce your ideas also affects your Coherence & Cohesion (CC) score?
Most Band 6 candidates introduce their arguments like this:
“Technology is very useful because it helps people do daily things in an easier way.”
This is correct, but it’s too long and basic.
Instead, higher-band candidates first introduce the idea in one or two words, then expand:
Convenience -> Technology makes daily routines easier and more efficient.
One major advantage of modern technology is convenience. It allows people to complete everyday tasks more quickly and with less effort. For instance, online shopping platforms save individuals considerable time, since they can order products from home rather than visiting physical stores. This efficiency not only makes daily routines smoother but also frees up time for work, hobbies, or spending time with family.
This approach makes your argument clearer, raises your chances of scoring 7.0+ in CC, and gives a sharper introduction to your point.
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